Your first chapter is the most important chapter of your book. Not only is it the chapter you send to agents, but it has to hook readers as well! We'll give you concrete feedback on how to improve your story from the very first line.
What we help with:
A great first line that captivates readers
How to introduce your main character to the reader
A starting point that offers a glimpse of the main character's life before the inciting incident
Worldbuilding that doesn't overwhelm the reader
How to introduce the main character's GMC (goal, motivation, and conflict)
Includes overall feedback and in-document comments, one pass ($.040 per word)
First chapter cannot exceed 6,000 words
Hannah assisted in acquisitions for TouchPoint Press and evaluated potential manuscripts for publication. She also worked as an assistant editor at The RoadRunner Press. Hannah is currently getting her Popular Fiction Writing and Publishing MFA from Emerson College.
How to work with us:
Send us an email at firstname.lastname@example.org with the subject line “first chapter critique" and a brief synopsis of your book.
If you would like a sample of Hannah's editing style, please send us an email with a one-page, double-spaced, 12 pt. font sample of your work as a .doc or .dox attachment to email@example.com with the subject line "first chapter sample". We can't wait to work with you!